A Virtuous Vice - Living Poetry

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By Stacie Naczelnik

A Virtuous Vice

Going to bed with you

is like sniffing gas caps:

unhealthy, stupid

but, oh so good.

An acquired taste

like cheese, wine,

or pimiento olives.

A habit hard to quit

like nail biting, cigarettes,

or television.

Unavoidable.

Unexplainable.

Unbelievable.

Can you identify what form I used to write this poem?

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jimmythejock Level 4 Commenter 4 years ago

I love it Stacie you have the heart of a poet.....jimmy

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G-Ma Johnson Level 4 Commenter 4 years ago

you go girl..so sweet and young...and so with it..I Love you stacie G-Ma Johnson

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gamergirl Level 1 Commenter 4 years ago

I love this poem!

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cgull8m 4 years ago

A nice dedication for love, Stacie. Check my poems when you have a chance here. Cheers :)

http://cgullworld.blogspot.com/search/label/poem

bitv 4 years ago

it's like getting up without coffee..look out! nice hub post.

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